We had a presentation to propose our idea to the clients and I illustrated the icons with Komal while Lai Yenn compiled the slides.
The comments that we've gotten from the clients were, that this is a good idea and we can add more scenarios to the book. Currently, we had 4 scenes, and each scene roughly took up 8 pages, so, if we were to add more scenes, there will be more than 32 pages. It is my fault for forgetting to mention how many pages we are doing. In my opinion, I think children have short attention span, so we try not to put in too many scenes. But we did mentioned that this book is part of a series, so if parents or their children wish to read more, they can purchase other series.
Another comment we've gotten is, other than rainbows coming out and them dancing, add in more actions, more surprises so that children will be more curious as to what will happen next. I half agree on that suggestion. The reason why we make all the Dog's scene the same, with the characters bobbing their head to music, is because we wanted it consistent. So, that children would know that they have make the right choice when they see the same music play and the character's same dance. Nevertheless, I still like the idea of adding different actions and surprises. Maybe we will implement this in our other future series.
